Saturday, March 27, 2010

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Week 10"The Slimey Slippery Snake"
This was the post Aaron from Ms. Goerend's class wrote. He was very descriptive in describing the snake and the way it looked and moved.
He wrote:
The slithering slimy snake skates his way out of the wet jungle and into the slime colored sky
singing his sweetly silly song all the way to the boiling sun. All while sweating and smiling with his sloppy teeth and slippery slobber filled tong slipping through his mouth.

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